Introducing Kelly - Lead Communications Manager
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Hi Kelly.
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" thanks so much for the well wishes! | |
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Welcome new Not-A-Cockroach :)
I hope you will have a good time here with us all. My best wishes for a smooth start in your new life. |
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Good luck XD
What doesn't cause my death makes me stronger
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Not a good start for communication when you just post a vague "soon" answer to something already a month past due. Cmon guys, what is happening.
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Heyo and welcome ^_^
Hope that forum gets all upcoming announcements and teasers, and to be less X and reddit exlusive. |
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A new Lead CM is greatly appreciated considering the disaster currently communication team has been. We're all supporters of the game and hoped to be treated as such.
I hope you will bring something new to the scene! And wish you all the best in your new role. | |
" Welcome and congrats on the new role! Hopeful to see more spontaneous interaction with the community. :) | |
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ChatGPT can help you such as this:
Main issues: * “Alongside my very lovely and welcoming team members” sounds a bit gushy/unprofessional for a comms message * The sentence is long and clunky * “community stuff” is vague * Listing that many names mid-sentence breaks flow Cleaner options: Option 1 (simple, professional): “Alongside my team—Natalia, Blake, Eben, Matthew, Nick, Kiki, and Tom—we’ll be managing community, media, and public relations.” Option 2 (more polished): “I’ll be working with my team—Natalia, Blake, Eben, Matthew, Nick, Kiki, and Tom—to manage community engagement, media, and public relations.” Option 3 (if they want a friendly tone but not cringe): “I’m joined by a great team—Natalia, Blake, Eben, Matthew, Nick, Kiki, and Tom—as we handle community engagement, media, and public relations.” |
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