"Carry The Weight"
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I'm finally home no time to fap I worked all day let's open this map! All going well till I cast my first spell It was a very big hit My screen xploded, can't see shit Let me enjoy this run keep it short and fun Got my filter on strict but it won't do the trick - Now what do I see? A mission for me! Look at this temple which architect to kill? what is this timer? why can't it chill? Alva, sure I help her out just reading what is this about? Time's up exile, sudden doom can't you read the god damn room? - Another mission for me well isn't this nice It's someone called Jun and I'm rolling the dice So many options, take another long look I thought I came to escape but here we are reading facebook Now read all this shit and look at the connections I'm getting kinda bored are these some kinda elections? Can't I just kill this dude? Like cut off his head? I'm in that type of mood don't we want them all dead? It's an awful lot with all these things What if I just shook all their hands? I could untie these red strings and maybe get unveiled pants? - Look, an altar, another full stop now I'm sitting here like a dumb rock It seems to be loaded with all sorts of loot But after inspection it's all poopi-di-poop Now sift through this trash and take a wild pick which of these items would be the least shit? My vibes have sunken like a big brick Well I guess it's finally time let me to reroll this shit with my very last dime - Wait... I started this grind around six-seven o'clock and now it's midnight? Well suck my fat cock! DID YOU REALLY THINK YOU COULD ESCAPE YOUR JOB! NOW STUDY THESE SPREADSHEETS AND WORK OUT THIS SLOP! JUST LEARN TO ENDURE THIS INSUFFERABLE PAIN! THEN PUSH TO THE LIMIT YOUR TIRED FRIED BRAIN! YOU CAN NOT ESCAPE OR SCRATCH THIS ITCH THIS GAME AND YOU ARE NOT THE SAME! NOW ASK YOURSELF, MY EXILE BITCH ARE YOU AND ME... STILL SANE?  Last bumped on Mar 15, 2026, 12:06:55 PM
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You were supposed to touch the gras, not smoke it ;P
I think the stanza is a litlle of here and there but overall i think it's a solid B- |
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The meter is a bit off in some places.
But it's still an excellent poem! Thanks, made my day! A sword he brought, his foes to maim and rend,
from places dark behind forbidden doors, But night by night he woke with frighten'd roars from darkest dreams, too strange to comprehend. (Anonymous) |
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