Trying first selfmade Build, need advice Winter Orb

Hi guys,



i hope this doesn't get deleted or hated right away.

i finally tried to build myself a build. i never did that and i'm probably shit at it.

i looked up many, MANY passive trees on ninja to get something what i think COULD work.



the Idea is to get Winter orb working to farm t15 - t16 maps. bosses would be nice to have, but i'm just looking to have some serious fun while mapping.

However, while i think my Life can get better than what im seeing in pob to a point where i could imagine it works, my damage does not.



i got almost 4k HP and 700 ES both of them are able to be higher with almost no problem so yeah. that is that.



my total dps however is stuck at about 164k lvl 95 and i don't know how to get it higher (would love to get to about 250k) because i consider this cap as "Okayish at t15"



please note: some items like ring are impossible rolls just so i can get max resists, for testing purposes.

ill adjust that for sure.



would someone be so kind to look at it, and tell me why my build is shit and what i could do to get better at building ?



thank you ! :)



btw: take the early no cluster tree.

https://pastebin.com/W3Xb1saC

Guess I gotta do it myself then. Thanks

Best of luck!

Thank you! Will Def. Post news as soon as I got some!