First Life, New player - looking for feedback

Completely new player here.

Came up with build from passive tree. I will use loot as it comes to me (of course)

What do you experts think?

https://www.poeplanner.com/AA0AAQ0ADRIAAIPvetN-fXX-urvjxKKn1P7IFSC1CHGhj0-xMCU_vqd1y-pizZiNfkMx2sF07QUtTP9OKio4W68NjYd2Sn3uDn8r1oo51G_yoJ8j9o19MHxRR5UF2cYylH8CpuAIiZrxXWjKqedUJP3_3o2_BbXC7CpbefZS7IJeQza0xWKsbIydqjY9bWy1SA-rFr8mlWHiVUuMNonTcFLUIzBx3ahLeDpCIXaGzsEz3Q2bjQguZU1W-qr4qKLB2L02R35NknrvLOkA7ipNPydKyG6qtfI1kti9cmxsRjIJ_o99W6xH_MXtgxmOAF6_1VO7TeOmVzrhDPLDM1oapctrkBLxL3ItTRcmeoTQrUHQAAAAAAA=

Idea is to maximize damage and crits while maintaining healthy survival was ranged player with movement speed, knockback, evasion, health, and dodge.

It seem pretty straight forward (I think) aside for frenzy focus of the build as I do not know how these actually work in-game.

How can I fix my mana problem? Is gear good enough for that?

Please let me know.

Thanks