Recently started writing a story for this game.

I don't have a beta so I'm just asking for some general feedback on my writing style. I don't really know if this post is even allowed on General Discussion so if it isn't please tell me so I can move it to Off Topic!


https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11701036/1/To-Err-Is-Human

Hey man, this is great, and the right spot to post it. it's hard to get people to sit and read anything too long, so don't feel bad about the lack of feedback, I can assure you, your writing style is appealing and tells a fun story so far.

You may find this person's stories intriguing as well, as it showcases a lot of the character's origin and also has a very desirable style of reading.

https://www.pathofexile.com/forum/view-thread/1414654

Keep on writing, if you're concerned about the legality of it, try to email one of the staff of GGG, I'm sure they wouldn't have an issue with it, and if they find it interesting, they will even showcase it in the news. :)

There is always room for improvement go however that had me hooked through all 3 chapters. Keep it up!!

Also I wouldn't mind being a proofreader :)